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Different Styles, Indifferent Ways
I’ve been thinking a lot this past few weeks, trying to understand why I am unable to write the words I want to on my novel, why I have not started to work on my short story properly and why my painting is still untouched. Then it occurred to me -I must be suffering from Gauguin’s syndrome, confused? Let me explain…
Sometime last year (with a good mate of mine) I visited an exhibition by Paul Gauguin which was hosted at the Tate Modern. I thoroughly enjoyed the experience -yes, it was overcrowded and at some point it was quite stuffy but I digress. Whilst viewing the paintings it surprised me to see Gauguin had struggled to find his own style until quite late in his years. I was bemused to note that he attempted to work by adopting styles of the various impressionists (composition being the area he deliberately challenged) and he also tried very hard to incorporate lots of colours in his paintings which I found did not work for him but eventually he came to his own and his paintings in his later years shows that he learnt from his peers and became the artist we appreciate today.
Here’s an example where his style mimics Paul Cezanne‘s very closely (the first painting is the work of Cezanne and the painting below is Gauguin’s -see the resemblance in style?):
A Story… Looking Good on the ROW80 Front
After my odd week last week -and my realisation of what was going on on Monday (if you haven’t read Monday’s post, do so as I had an epiphany on how powerful our mind can be and how it can affect our daily lives) the past two day has been relatively productive. This change in the breeze is a welcome relief. 
I’ve visited and commented on all my allocated team for Sunday’ check-in (a promise is a promise). *yay* I’ve written two blog posts (including this one), a guest blog post for Rance Denton over at The Action Prose and added 240 words to Our Story Begins; here’s a snippet:
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ROWed Under -it’s been Difficult…
I should have updated my ROW80 page yesterday and posted it as a fabulous update on the ROW80 linky list; but I couldn’t, my heart was not in it -nor is it today; but I owe you guys some form of noise, so I will babble about what’s been going on (well, I’ll try)…
I was trying to find a balance between my inner and outer world -AKA as my writing and my world outside of writing; the two parts of me are not gelling as well as I hoped it would. When one goes well, the other is neglected for a while; then when one goes from bad to worse the other becomes non-existent as the guilt for messing up riddles me with many holes which I find difficult to heal.
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‘Alo-ween to y’all NaNoWriMo’s with a Blah-Blogging and an Ominous MIA Attempt…
Monday’s (Muwahahahahaaaaaa) Meandering Muse:
An ‘appy ‘Alooo-weeeen to you-aaaaaaaaaallllllllllll… Muwahahahahaaaaaa. Halloween’s been and nearly gone in the UK (it’s not that huge over in my part of the woods, so there are no interesting ghoulish stories to tell); besides I’m not a huge Halloween follower (my stories say otherwise I know!). However; this year, to mark the occasion, I managed to write one spooky story Sarahann’s Warning; this I have decided to enter into a competition. Haley Whitehall devised a Horror Flash Fiction Contest -seeing Haley introduced me to Flash Fictions, it’s only fitting that I should enter this competition -so I did. Please pop over to Haley’s blog and check out the other entries too.
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A ROW80 Re-Shuffle is in Order…
Savvy Sunday Salutations:
I have some exciting new developments to share with you with regards to the guest blogger feature we will have here on yikici. As you may/may not be aware, Sunday’s feature will focus on bloggers who I feel fits in with what my idea of ‘Savvy’ is (my definitions vary to some extent, but overall people with a fresh outlook and those who are very engaging get my savvy-vote-of-approval). I have asked these (watch this space) fabulous souls to write/create a post which they enjoy writing/creating, following this, there will be a short burst of questions and answer sessions -just so we can get to know them all that better –isn’t that just cool? 
Resident Blogger, Patrick Tulley, will kick it off this coming Sunday, 23rd October 2011, (the next guest blogger will feature a fortnight after); if you are intrigued and want to find out what Patrick likes to write/create etc, please feel free to pop by then and check out his savvy post. For the time being, let’s get back to my ROW80 check-in.
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A Fun Game – In Your Head (Part Three)
Frivolous Fun Friday:
I cannot believe I forgot today was Friday! How ditzy of me! (This is the reason why today’s blog post has just materialized!) It’s been a hectic (and fun) week spending quality time with my lovely family -unfortunately the head cold/flu I have been suffering from has not helped me to think clearly for my regular writing sprints (a fuzzy brain comes to mind). Fortunately I am getting better -therefore, I am hoping the next few days I will get back to normal (whatever normal may be). Being out of sync is just a weird-out-of-body experience, don’t you think? Have you ever had moments like that and just found it too difficult to concentrate and make sense of things? How did you resolve the setbacks (if any)? Whilst I leave you to ponder on that, I think it’s best that I do not waste any more valuable time and go straight onto today’s post.
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
Let the Fun Game In Your Head Begin…
It is now exactly one month since we embarked on this mind game and I am hoping all the participants have had fun *looks up expectantly* -I am actually intrigued on how they tackled the task at hand and if my theory has worked *prays*
In short: Today is part three of the game I devised four weeks ago; if you still do not know what it is all about then head on over to this post. Now comes the fun part, Billie Jo Woods, CM Stewart and Cynthia all stood up to the unusual challenge. They were required to create a character(s) profile and write a 200-300 word dialogue within the guidelines I set out in part one of this game (see the details below). In part two, I asked them to email the character(s) profile they created to one of the participants (names selected out of a hat by me); with the character(s) profile(s) they received they had to write another 200-300 word dialogue (again meeting the same requirements as mentioned below).
Setting: A small quiet village approx 200 miles from the nearest city adorned with thatched cottages and surrounded by vast empty fields. Not much happens here, except for their festival –the festival of colour, this happens once a year; tourists and families from afar visit, no one misses this event. This is the highlight of the year for the villagers; they prepare for this the whole year.
The Dialogue Prompts:
- No children live in the village.
- A child hides in a barn and stays after the festivities.
- Your character(s) interacts with the child.
- The child has a secret.
- Add a surprise of your own -in keeping with your character(s) profile.
Here’s a quick recap on my theory (just in case you have forgotten -I’ve quoted myself 
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It’s quite a simple theory if you really think about. I am inclined to think, -if and that’s a HUMANGOUS if; if our character(s) profiles are written with great care; if we build them like a real person, know their likes and dislikes etc and those random quirks they have, -then in ‘theory’ the voice of that character will not change much if another person writes from their POV (point of view). I mean, there might be the odd variation -and I don’t expect the dialogues to be identical, I just would like to believe that that voice would be easily identifiable as X character(s) voice than anyone’s else. We will now have a better idea now that we have reached the final stage of this game. We can now analyse and compare to see if my theory holds true or is just a random errand thought.
Image sourced from: http://www.guardian.co.uk/
Now Comes the Fun Part: It’s the Grande Finale; therefore, participants (Billie Jo, Cynthia and Cynthia ) you can now share share share all that you have done on your blog and link it in the linky tool below. I’ll leave it up to you if you would like to write one blog post or several -the linky tool will be open for two weeks so that should give you enough time (if you need more time let me know). Please ensure you display your original (own) character(s) profile(s) and dialogues separate to the character(s) profile(s) you have received and written a dialogue accordingly to.
What’s Next? The next three frivolous Friday’ post I will collate the related character(s) profile(s) and dialogues (both the original and the second writers); we will then look at the similarities and differences and see if and why they differ. Billie Jo, Cynthia and Cynthia I would like to have insights from yourselves (I will email you shortly and explain my thoughts).
If you want to display these links on your blog, please feel free to get the InLinkz code here.
Should you have any questions or suggestions, please ask/let me below in the comment box or via the contact details below.
Before I forget, this game is for fun so sadly there are no prizes; but if it proves popular and there’s a demand for it to be played again in the future, I’ll keep a note and consider it then.
Have a fab-tastic Friday and a wondrous weekend. Keep that positivity-a-glowing and your smile forever shining -stay in peace.
A Tiny Note: This game is the final stage of the game; in two weeks (22/10/2011) we shall analyse the results and have a debate/discussion, so please feel free to pop by then and join in.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: A Fun Game – In Your Head (Part Three)
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin[at]yikici[dot]co[dot]uk
ROW80 Goals-A-Starting & NaNoWriMo-A-Decisions-A-Planning
Tricky Tuesday’s Treachery:
Dearest readers/visitors, as you are aware I have been (and still am) busy with spending time with my family who have flown over from Turkey to see me; this has limited my time and therefore I have been unable to do my regular writing sprints. This pattern is likely continue until next week. (Apologies from now). I will aim to do my best -though today I have noticed I am coming down with a cold/flu, have a sore throat (so annoying!) and my brain just wants to sleep (I’m doing my best to keep my eyes open whilst writing this). Anyhoo, the reason for this post is to a) let you know why there may be some silence at my end (as explained above), b) what to expect and c) ROW80 has started too…
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
ROW80:
ROW80 has started this week (Monday October 3rd 2011) and I have been sooo looking forward to it. Due to my unexpected busy past week I have been unable to finalise my goals; therefore, I want to loosely write it here and once I get back into my routine (and feel a whole lot better after this pesky cold/flu) I hope to make more sense of the goals in my head. In the meantime, if you want to take part in ROW80 but are still unsure what it is all about then head on over to the ROW80 webpage, follow the instructions (not that complicated) and sign up.
that complicated) and sign up.
My ROW80 Goals (for now):
- Write at least three blog posts a week.
- Write and edit at least one short story a week for the short stories book I’m planning to publish by the end of the year.
- Start studying Tiffany Lawson’ (The Triple Threat Behind Staging A Scene, Oct. 2 – 30) online course.
- Read at least 3 chapters per week of the book I’m doing for the beta-reading.
- Start working effectively with my critique group.
- Think about how feasible it will to take part in NaNoWriMo this year as I may have to go abroad in November to see my gran (unexpected plan).
- Visit at least 5 blogs per day and comment on at least 3 posts.
- Attend the ROW80 Twitter Party on October 5th 2011 (health permitting). Why don’t you join us -further details can be found on Jenny Hansen’ blog.
- Take two days off per week for family, friends and ME-time!
I will amend these goals in the next two weeks as I feel better and I fall back into my normal routine.
What to Expect…
I plan my next blog post to be on Friday (the final stage of the Fun Game: In Your Head), following that my 100th post should make an appearance on Sunday. I am hoping to focus more on writing my stories, and getting them published more than just writing blog posts as I have done in the last round. For this reason, I wanted to take part in NaNoWriMo this year but it seems the whole family will be coming together in Turkey to see my grandmother early November and I really want to go and see her. This will mean I will have to forfeit NaNo as I am unlikely to have a space to sit down and type away (family gatherings are always so hectic and demanding) therefore, I am totally undecided and torn, any insightful suggestions will be gladly considered. If I do take part in NaNoWriMo another thing I need to evaluate is my username, I signed up back on May 2011 with my alter-ego doodllz and now am wondering if I should use yikici instead. I held it to a vote and the final count came to doodllz 4.5 and yikici 7; I am thinking if I do take part I could always sign under doodllz as yikici’ doodllz -what are your thoughts?
I best end this post here, I need to take herbal remedies, get ready and be prepared to do some more sight-seeing: Natural History Museum & The Science Museum.
Have a fabulous day.
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What are your plans for this week and ROW80? As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: ROW80 Goals-A-Starting & NaNoWriMo-A-Decisions-A-Planning
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin[at]yikici[dot]co[dot]uk
Care to join me for some collaborative work or want to be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
ROW80 Round 4? – Count Me In!
Savvy Sunday Salutations:
Dearest readers, I am currently in the process of changing the format of Savvy Sunday Salutations –where I’ll be sending out salutations to fab-tastic bloggers alike who will be joining us here on yikici with an article of their own and a selection of questions I hope they will answer. This does mean that (sadly) Patrick Tulley will not be featuring here on yikici; however, Patrick and I are currently discussing options of setting up another blog more geared to philosophy and psychology with some elements of creativity (I will keep you posted as this develops). If you have any suggestions we’d love to hear from you and/or if you would like to feature as a guest blogger on the new site, let us know and we will consider it.
Savvy Sunday Salutations (with guest bloggers) will now roll out on a fortnightly (two weekly) basis; where I get back into ROW80 there will be weekly updates every Wednesday’ and Sunday’.
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
ROW80 ROUND 4? – (Count Me In):
ROW80 round 4 starts 4th October 2011 –and guess what? Yep! I will be taking part again and again and AGAIN. I had soooo much fun last round (and even if I had bad days the support was so great; my fab fellow ROW80’ers just inspired me to keep going) I cannot imagine writing without ROW80 and its brilliant community. If you are a fellow writer and are looking for that extra boost, join us for ROW80 Round 4 and you will see what the fuss is about… For more information pop on over to the blog Kait Nolan has set up: ROW80 – What is it all about? Alternatively, have a look at my thoughts about it here (ROW80 – Round 3) and see what I achieved in the last round –love the vibe? Thought so -now what are you waiting for! Quick sign-up here —> (Round 4 Sign-up).
I look forward to seeing you all taking part (if you choose to do so –I hope you do), in the meantime I am thinking up my new ROW80 goals and have also volunteered to be a sponsor (so shall see if I make it through the competition). There is also a party being planned to celebrate the close of ROW80 Round 3, check out Jenny Hansen’s blog —> A Party is Coming! A Party is Coming! So, there you have it. I hope to see you all at the starting line on 4th October and hopefully you can join us for the Twitter Party Jenny is coordinating.
This is me for now, I’ll be back on Tuesday with a new Triptych Tapestry Challenge –oh and before I forget this is post number 91; so it 9 posts time a milestone will be reached. *jumps in the air* ‘yippie’ –if you have ideas for celebrating this milestone please contact me either via the comment box below or through email (see below).
Have a wondrous weekend –now I’m off to respond to emails and the lovely comments you have left me (sorry I have been a bit lax this past week –it’s just a wee hectic over here; getting ready for visitors (family) from overseas).
Want to read more? Here’s a selection for you:
Love challenges -particularly Flash Fictions? Take this month’s challenge (you still have time to participate): Challenge Issued: Turner’s Tapestries
Want to know how the game is developing -pop by and have a peak… A Fun Game – In Your Head (Part Deux)
One of your favourite reads: Copyright – What Do You Constitute as Ok?
Copyright © Ozlem Yikici 2011 & Copyright © doodllz™ 2011. All Rights Reserved.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: ROW80 Round 4 – Count Me In!
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin[at]yikici[dot]co[dot]uk
Care to join me for some collaborative work or want to be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
A Fun Game – In Your Head (Part Deux)
Frivolous Fun Friday:
Good morning *yawns* I’m sitting at my desk with a lovely cup of brewed English Tea and on top of that my laptop is cooperating (The external hard drive arrived this morning, so after this post I will be doing some serious backing-up *cheers*). It’s a beautiful sunny day here the UK (I know you all probably do not want a weather report -and this is not one I promise) -so despite that earlier *yawn* I’m on a positive this morning and I hope you all are too -I’m sure my fabulous readers and visitors are doing super-duper.
Before we get onto the game I had to share a video -last night as I was trying to sleep I heard a cat meowing (or rather having an argument) and it reminded me of a video I had watched on YouTube a while back, (it had me in a fit of giggles back then) and so as an extra Frivolous Fun Friday treat I give you:
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
Let the Fun Game Begin…
Now back to today’s post. Today is part two of the game I devised two weeks ago; if you want to see what it’s all about head on over to this post <—well, if you don’t click you will not find out; what are you like!
Have you come back? Oh good; I have to say that I am delighted by the interest shown and also extremely happy that there’s a fab few (Billie Jo Woods, Jody Moller, CM Stewart and Cynthia) who wanted to take part. I too was considering to take part but what with my laptop causing me problems -I didn’t get far enough to think about it (I was too annoyed, hence it hindered my progress), therefore, I think it’s best I be the ‘games master(ess)’ -well, someone has to do it. In addition, Jody had to pull out due to personal reasons (Jody, I hope all goes smoothly); therefore our contestants are now three in total (three is a good number -all things comes in threes, so maybe this is a good sign).
Matching-up the Names: In order for it to be fair, I have put the three participants name into a hat and pulled them out. I matched them to the names I had previously written down in an alphabetical order; this is the final list:
Cynthia E. —> CM Stewart
CM Stewart —> Billie Jo Woods
Billie Jo Woods —> Cynthia E.
This next part will involve emailing across your character(s) profile to the person on the other side of the arrow e.g. Cynthia will email to CM Stewart; CM Stewart will send an email to Billie Jo Woods and Billie Jo will email Cynthia -ok so far? Good. (I will be contacting you guys with the email addresses you need, therefore keep an eye out for that.) Once the emails are received and you have a read of the character(s) profile you have in front of you I want you to write another 200-300 words dialogue with the same setting in mind (see below) and also include the required prompts that are needed for the dialogue (also below).
Setting: A small quiet village approx 200 miles from the nearest city adorned with thatched cottages and surrounded by vast empty fields. Not much happens here, except for their festival –the festival of colour, this happens once a year; tourists and families from afar visit, no one misses this event. This is the highlight of the year for the villagers; they prepare for this the whole year.
The Dialogue Prompts:
- No children live in the village.
- A child hides in a barn and stays after the festivities.
- Your character(s) interacts with the child.
- The child has a secret.
- Add a surprise of your own -in keeping with your character(s) profile.
Remember, no sharing your dialogues until I say so. Now get those dialogues a-ready; think, plot and come back in two weeks time; I will reveal the next stage of the game (the Grande Finale).
In Your Head…
Now comes to the part about my theory; I was in two minds if I should reveal it now or reveal it when we reach stage three (see I do not want to put pressure on my fab participants), but seeing that you have waited patiently I will let you in on my thoughts. It’s quite a simple theory if you really think about. I am inclined to think, -if and that’s a HUMANGOUS if; if our character(s) profiles are written with great care; if we build them like a real person, know their likes and dislikes etc and those random quirks they have, -then in ‘theory’ the voice of that character will not change much if another person’s writes from their POV (point of view). I mean, there might be the odd variation -and I don’t expect the dialogues to be identical, I just would like to believe that that voice would be easily identifiable as X character(s) voice than anyone’s else. Does that make sense? We will get a better idea when we reach the final stage when we can analyse and compare to see if my theory holds true or is just a random errand thought. (I will try and set up one of those linky lists so it’s easier to work with.)
If you have any questions or suggestions, please ask/let me below in the comment box or via the contact details below.
Before I forget, this game is for fun so sadly there are no prizes; but if it proves popular and there’s a demand for it to be played again in the future, I’ll keep a note and consider it then.
Have a fab-tastic Friday and a wondrous weekend. Keep that positivity-a-glowing and your smile forever shining -stay in peace.
A Tiny Note: This game is currently being played in three stages; this is stage two. Stage three is in two weeks (07/10/2011). I am having a bit of a semi-brainwave for the final stage (to make it fun), come back in two weeks and see what I am cooking up.
Copyright © Ozlem Yikici 2011 & Copyright © doodllz™ 2011. All Rights Reserved.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: A Fun Game – In Your Head (Part Deux)
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin[at]yikici[dot]co[dot]uk
Challenge Taken: Hansel & Gretel – Our (Untold) Story
Whimsical Wednesday Writings:
My laptop has been an angel today *prays not to jinx it* -it seems ok as long as I keep it stationary on a desk and not move it (I think my laptop is just crying out for a holiday or something -the amount of times it moves around with me, I think it has gone dizzy!). So it is now a permanent fixture on my desk (no writing at my bed; maybe it’s a good thing). Anyhoo, let me get back to the post -there’s a lot to get through; well, there’s my last update for ROW80 (whoopie dooooo) and a special flash fiction (An adaptation of Hansel & Gretel -you guys peeked at the title? That is soooooooo unfair ).
Please feel free to scroll down to the sections that are of interest to you -that is if you do not want to read the next bit (I won’t take any offence –well, I’ll try not to ).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
ROW80 Final Check-in
Firstly, let us start with my final ROW80 update… My goodness, it has been an interesting journey. I have been extremely tough on myself -with what I have not accomplished -well that was up until I created my ROW80 – Round 3 Page (<— click here to check it out -it’s a comprehensive ROW80 progress-to-date at a glance), since then I have taken a deep breath and appreciated what I have actually achieved. Ok, I set out to write more words on Becoming – Mystical Realisations however; I had to stop quite a bit to rework the first three chapters (I have ended with adding three extra chapters before my very first chapter -and still I need to do some tweaking). Even though I have outlined my novel, I realised something was missing, so I had to go back and make it work. It was disheartening -and at one point I just left it due to my own annoyance (I’m my worst enemy at times); feedback from my beta-readers helped me see sense and made me realise it is worth pursuing so, I am working on it again -with casual steps. Due to this set-back I concentrated more on blog posts and flash fictions -all was a welcomed distraction. Having said that, this experience has made me see how valuable ROW80 is and so for the next round I am hoping to be more planned, organised and focused. *fingers-crossed* amongst all this, I have still managed to visit blogs (approx 30 a week), do a bit of beta-reading myself (which is going well) and taken time out where needed. I have written in more detail over in the ROW80 – Round 3 page and there’s also an ‘On Reflection…’ part, so please pop over there and see the whole journey from beginning to end, in the meantime here’s my progress since my last update:
Progress Since Sunday 11th September 2011:
WIP word count: 0 words written.
Blog post word count: 6005 words written.
DiRosaYikici word count: 0 words written.
Combined effort word count: 6005 (See the ROW80 progress bar on the side menu.)
That’s like 750 words per day –not bad; dare I say still on target despite the low mood this past week? *cheers*
To check out my progress-to-date-page please click here.
Stories, stories, stories…
I know I promised to update Our Story Begins (over at DiRosaYikici); this has not happened due to my laptop taking regular naps, so I’ll update that for the next Wednesday post. In its place please take a moment and relax (grab a cuppa if you must) and see how my new flash fiction has taken shape.
This flash fiction has been inspired by a few delightful souls:
Sonia G. Medeiros’ challenge A Fairy Tale set my mind in motion, I thought of Cinderella, Rapunzel, The Little Mermaid and Snow White -then I dismissed it all as it has been done before. My brain kept ticking then Hansel & Gretel came to mind; then everything else flowed in freely. I found a way to tie in Billie Jo Woods challenge (Back to School is Cool or Maybe Not…) and Haley Whitehall’ challenge Powers just fell in nicely with the setting. I tried (very hard) to incorporate some Fantasy Comedy -as it’s part of my own challenge (Challenge Issued: Turner’s Tapestries); however, I feel I have not accomplished that task so I will not include it as the challenges set (if you think I should rethink it let me know and I’ll consider that for a wee while). I enjoyed this challenge (though I could not keep it within the required 500 word count -I just had too much fun -shoot me -erm not literally ). I have to say I was writing this story whilst I was at my friends’ house and he decided to talk about Hansel & Gretel (not knowing I was writing a story about them); it was uncanny and in a bizarre way it just felt like it was meant to be… I hope you enjoy it as much as I have had fun writing it.
Hansel & Gretel – Our (Untold) Story
Infuriated. “Hanseeeeeeeeeel!” Wilhelm Grimm’ voice travelled out of his quarters, through the narrow stone corridors, up the labyrinth-like spiral stairways, through the grand hall, the classrooms and abruptly stopped as it found Hansel and Gretel cowering in the third bell tower. He appeared, eyes fuming; arms tightly crossed against his chest, his fingers scratching his skin. Gretel let out a giggle as she watched her fables and magic tutor Wilhelm Grimm’s’ skin sprout pink fluffy clouds of cotton. His eyes fell on hers, “I should have known this was a combined effort…why can’t you put this much effort into your studies?” His eyes left hers and focused on Hansel, “Undo this right now.”
“We can’t…we don’t know how to…” he said.
“Undo this right now –or else Head-Wizard Jacob will hear off this.”
Hansel looked at Gretel, pleading; Gretel shook her head “It’s not working,” she whispered.
“Students like yourselves constantly underestimate us,” Wilhelm said, still itching, “we know what your individual powers are, you cannot erase my memory young Miss,” his look pierced through Gretel, “this calls for detention!”
“-But Sir…” they said.
Wilhelm silenced them with his most potent glare “It’s best if you did not protest, nor test my patience –now undo this.”
“We don’t know how we did it-” Gretel blurted; Hansel jabbed her in the ribs “Owww!”
“I was not the one wanting cotton candy.”
She darted him a look lavished with annoyance “You can’t talk –what was that thing about a hamster before the spell exploded?”
They both giggled.
“Enough!” Wilhelm’ patience wearing thin “Jacob is waiting; take your places in the circle”.
Image sourced from: http://fairytalenewsblog.blogspot.com
“Why do I ever listen to you,” Gretel moaned as she scrubbed the floor, each stroke bringing up furry-ridden sparks.
“Stop whinging, we are lucky to still have our powers.”
The door creaked “Humph” Gretel looked up to see her -their captor, at the door.
“What powers are you two whispering about?” she hobbled into the room that enslaved them, “well?”
Hansel’ voice urgent “Gretel now would be a good time-”
Gretel glared at Hansel “that’s not helping!”
She tripped over the bucket Gretel had placed strategically between her and the door, caught the soap and skidded ungracefully -finding herself as part of the crevices of the biscuit-stone walls of the gingerbread-house, before ironing herself out and dusting off the crumbs. Fuming, she edged towards the square slab Gretel was working on, her eyes red-raw; she yanked Gretel’s hair “well?” she pressed, her lips thin and threatening.
“Owww! -You’re hurting me…” Gretel held onto her hair, tears flowing freely as she bit her lips.
She tugged her hair some more “Speak child before I cast a spell so great that your brothers’ fate will seem more favourable to what will befall onto you.”
Gretel shivered at the thought and tentatively looked up at the old Witch “I –I don’t know what you are talking about”.
“Well…there was something…you two were talking, something about power-”
“Power?” Strength came to Gretel, “surely you mean prowess?” She willed, concentrating hard, “prowess –you said it yourself; how it requires such prowess.”
“Did I?” The Witch scratched her head then shook it, “-what the hell am I saying! Why am I entertaining this? -Get out of my way girl,” she walked towards the cage that held Hansel captive “boy, reach out you hand.” Hansel’ armed morphed into a skeleton as it passed through the metal bars. “This is impossible! It’s been weeks –why haven’t you fattened up?” Her old eyes and senses failing her, she could not see the magic Hansel used to trick her since their imprisonment. “I cannot wait anymore” she turned towards Gretel “Go see if the oven is hot enough”. Alarmed, Gretel glanced at Hansel; he nodded in encouragement. “I don’t have all day, get a move on girl” the Witch shoved her towards the door.
Gretel dug her heels and stopped in the doorway, she turned back into the room “I won’t be able to tell if it is hot enough”.
“Heavens child –your skills are not something to be desired. Come with me.”
Gretel followed with caution, a few steps back as the Witch advanced to the kitchen. She peered into the oven “see child it’s-” was her last words.
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Gretel threw herself onto her father’s neck “promise you will not ever leave us again”.
Tears welled up around the woodcutters eyes, he hugged her tightly “I promise”.
Hansel eagerly pushed the cart and unintentionally hit his father’s knees, “you will not have to ever work again,” the woodcutter rubbed his knee as he peered over Gretel’s shoulder towards Hansel; a sack with gold coins gleamed in the sunlight.
A bewildered smile in his voice “what have you done?”
“We succeeded” Hansel beamed.
Gretel grinned too “Yes we did”.
The woodcutter stumbled backwards and sat on the dew covered grass. He looked at Hansel and Gretel with confusion “hold on a minute –what exactly do you mean by succeeded?”
“We solved the mystery surrounding our stepmother.”
Puzzled. “Your stepmother died a few days ago.”
“Exactly –mystery solved” Hansel said.
The woodcutter looked at both of his children –he looked at them for a long time. “What have I said about liars?”
“Daddy –we are not lying; the lesson’s finally paid off. We’ve been working very hard, all the clues were there –she slipped the night she locked us in our room and gave us bread and milk for supper; her eyes turned red –that was the sign-” Gretel said.
“-Your stepmother was crying all day, that’s why her eyes were red,” he shook his head as he added, “you two have listened to far too many fairytales at the Academy, this needs to stop”.
“They’re true –not stories; we had lessons on how to spot an evil Witch –stepmother fit the bill-”
“Enough! I will not have you disrespect your stepmother like this.”
Hansel and Gretel looked at each other, then at their father. “We killed a Witch a few days ago –she had the same red eyes as stepmother”.
“Witches are not real.” The woodcutter said.
Hansel sighed and dug out a thin, short stick from the cart “Then, how do you explain this?” he handed it to the woodcutter.
The woodcutter shrugged; “it’s a stick –so what?”
“Nooo!” Gretel reached for the stick “it’s a wand-”.
“-I know what it is you fool!” Gretel found herself staring into a deep-set of red eyes; she gulped and took a step back. There in front of them the woodcutter vanished as their stepmother took his place. Her cackle raised the hairs on their skin.
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Head-Wizard Jacob Grimm glared down on them “if it takes a whole century for you two to recreate the story as it should be -so be it; I’ll keep you in detention until you both understand how to abide by the rules here at Brothers Grimm Academy.”
Wilhelm smiled grimly and cursed under his breath whilst still scratching his skin and pulling out more pink fluff.
Hansel looked at Gretel; Gretel glowered at Hansel as they found themselves back in the woodcutters’ house for the third time, their stepmothers’ eyes glowing red-raw as they found themselves following their makeshift-father back into the woods.
Image sourced from: http://surlalunefairytales.blogspot.com
(The word count excluding the title is 1210 words –with it its 1216.)
So, that’s all for today, I will be back on Friday with a Frivolous Fun post (The next part to A Fun Game – In Your Head -you still have time to take part, just read the post and be prepared for this Friday), I hope you pop back then.
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My Weekend X Factor Muse
Monday’s Meandering Musical Muse:
I’m going to have a Monday moan today (well in this section at least), my laptop is playing up (keeps switching itself off at the slightest move), the power connectors seems not to be connecting effectively so I have not been able to get online for a little while (yes Saturdays and Sundays posts have suffered because of this). I am unsure how many attempts I’ll get to complete this post (fingers-crossed not many). I have invested in an external hard drive (just in case) and as soon as it arrives I will be backing-up all my documents for safe-keeping (I really do not want to lose all the work I have done up until now). This has made me realise that the things we have on our ‘to do list’ (like backing up valuable work) always on the backburner -a case of I’ll do that soon -and here I am hoping I’m not too late…
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
My Weekend X Factor Muse:
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Since my laptop has been sidelined, I have taken to catching up on what’s on ‘the box’ (AKA the TV); it’s that season where Strictly Come Dancing and The X Factor hits our screens. Of the two programs, I am more of a Strictly Come Dancing fan than The X Factor. However, this weekend I really got into the auditions of The X Factor (the new judges also brings a breath of fresh air); then when my laptop played ball, I YouTube’d the rest of the auditions and a few good candidates caught my eye. The 2011 contenders (in my eyes) to keep a watchful eye out for are (I have linked all the names to their X Factor auditions via YouTube -click to view): Derry Mensah (funny interactions with Kelly Rowland), Luigian Paala, Craig Colton, The Keys, Frankie Cocozza, Michelle Barrett, Johnny Robinson, 2 Shoes. My personal favourites (there’s a few) are: Lascel Woods, Amelia Lily, Sami Brookes, Misha Bryan (OMG), Luke Lucas, John Wilding (OMG); (my top three so far) Bradley Johnson, Jade Richards (OMG and then some) and Janet Delvin (OMG and then some and some more -I absolutely adore Elton John’ Your Song and Janet’s version of this fab song is totally spine-tingling). If you have the time, please take a moment or two to click on the links above and watch some amazingly talented people (both young and old); their personal stories are extremely inspiring as well as emotional. For those of you who have less time here’s my two favourites (both very different yet very endearing in their own ways), I hope you enjoy them as much as I have.
This year’s X Factor looks to be tough and entertaining -whilst pondering what is to come, I began to think of the past finalists; there has been some successful stars like, Will Young, Alexandra Burke, most recently Matt Cardle and who can forget Leona Lewis? Then I remembered a past favourite of mine, Olly Murs -turns out Olly has had a successful first album (not been following the music industry as much as I used to -ooops). His next single out from his second albums sounds like a chart-topper; with its upbeat reggae and ’90s influence, it is something special –I have been listening to it over and over and over again, -therefore, I had to share it with you too. Get ready to tap your feet to the beat -and for those who prefers the acoustic version (equally as good), I’ve added it below.
My Questions to You
Have you had a difficult week? Feel a little bit uninspired or just under the weather? Has technology hindered your progress or are you just ploughing through regardless of the difficulties? Whatever your week has been like I hope to at least put a smile on your faces with a few good tunes (break time listening) and some giggles and tears (it’s good to let it all out once in a while) with The X Factor contestants stories.
Enjoy this Musical Monday Muse session of mine, I’ll (hope) be back on Wednesday with an interesting Flash Fiction piece I have been working on as well as a new storyline over at DiRosaYikici. Plus I hope to provide you with a ROW80 update (sorry I did not show on Sunday). My mood has been low due to this problem with the laptop -fortunately, The X Factor and Olly Murs have put a smile on my face and a spring in my step so until Wednesday have fun, stay safe and smile always. The world is as good as you make it, so live life to its potential and cherish every moment.
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Pdf document: My Weekend X Factor Muse
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Tagged from Me to You
Thursday’s Topical Tête-à-Tête:
I finally make my way to the laptop to write today’s post; not that I am not in the mood to write (just been busy -so I’m out of my normal routine). I have to say I am in better spirits than yesterday so that’s always a good start, therefore, let’s just enjoy this rather carefree topical tête-à-tête today (there’s a tag game to play as well as some exciting news about moi which I wanted share).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
And now for some (me) news:
As you know -a while back I mentioned that one of my articles (My Encounter with Fate!) will be featured in a newsletter (so excited), -whilst the newsletter is not currently in circulation, I have been asked to take an active role in compiling the said newsletter -as well as editing. This is fab-tastic news, as it will give me some experience with publishing a newsletter. *dances a jig* I am really excited about this -my training for it starts next week, let me know if you would be interested in learning as I go along -I may put together a regular feature on how to publish a newsletter etc (just a random thought).
I’ve been tagged!
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Early this week one of my lovely blogger/writer friends, Allie Wilde (she is cool and has a great blog, why don’t you pop over and have a look-see), tagged me to share 10 random facts about myself. *scratches head* -now where and how am I going to compile such a list came to my mind (as well as ‘thank you for taking an interest and wanting to know a bit more about me’). *grins* -then a light shone bright in my cloudy-mind *rubs hands craftily* -a while back I was given two great awards (The Versatile Blogger‘ award by Sonia G Medeiros and The Irresistibly Sweet Blog Award by Walking The Pattern). As part of the ‘acceptance speech’ -as I’d like to call it; I had to share seven facts about me -you guys are so quick to catch on! So, yeah, I thought I’d copy those facts below and just add three new facts at the end to make it up to ten -ingenious (I know). So here it is (if you want to read the post about the awards click here):
10 Random Facts (about moi):
- Asides from writing; I love to paint (as in Art & Paintings) -oils in particular; I consider myself more of an artist than a writer -I guess that’s mainly for the fact that I studied Fine Art with Related Arts more than anything else; still Artist has a lovely ring to it -so an Artist I am!
- I am very particular in how my tea is brewed -especially when making English Tea; (it needs to be the right colour consistency and needs adequate milk for taste) therefore in most instances I volunteer to make my own tea -it would be a shame if I have to tip the tea away if not brewed properly!
- When writing I subconsciously miss out small (sometimes big) words -I do not notice the missed words if I read it back in my head -therefore, I have to read what I have written out loud when editing in order to spot these missed words; they can be terrors to find! I am certain you will spy these ‘omissions’ at times -when you do (notice how I am certain of this); do let me know so I can make the required corrections. -I also have a tendency to switch letters or digits around such as: hello = helol or 1976 = 1967 I eventually work out the misspelt word however; the digits prove a challenge -especially if it is a telephone number -can you see the wrong dialled numbers in your mind?!!
- I have been known to slip in Turkish words in sentences when speaking to someone in English and vice versa! Sometimes I get the sense that that word is ‘English’ or ‘Turkish’ -it’s only when the recipient is baffled by my talk do I realise something is at foot -you have been warned! Examples of such occasions can be found in this post.
- I’m a people’s person; I love chatting and engaging with most people -though public speaking is something I favour less; it brings out a nervous side that I cannot control. I think this may have been heightened more when I was part of a presentation group at University and had to dress up in a jesters outfit as I was the only person who could fit into it (being 5 foot has its advantages and disadvantages!). To top it all; I had the longest speech and the squeakiest voice (that’s how it sounded to me) -pair that with my fear -I read it in super-speed; needless to say I try my best to avoid such scenarios.
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- I used to work in Social Care (Support Worker for the elderly and vulnerable adults); a job that is varied and kept me on my toes with the colourful customers I engaged with. It was a job I loved and cherished dearly however, the last 2-3 years caused me undue stress and had caused negative impacts and implications on my health; therefore, I had to consider an alternative career path for myself. Sometimes what you love is not always good for you. I am hoping writing will not become like that, as it has literally become my saviour these past few months! Another reason why I am loving the award Sonia and Walking The Pattern has given me -Thank you!
- On a positive note, my claim to fame (if you want to call it that) is: During my retail years (I am lucky to have worked with some of the best: TopShop/TopMan, Daisy & Tom, Selfridges & Harrods). I have served several stars -including A-listers -here’s a few names: Isla Fisher (seen at Top Shop), Patsy Palmer (served at Daisy & Tom), Cat Deeley (served at Selfridges), Martin Kemp (served at Selfridges), Angelina Jolie (served at Selfridges) and Pierce Brosnan (served at Harrods) amongst others. (I may write a post solely on this in the near distant future; I need to ponder a bit more and see if I want to share my experiences.)
- I am not a natural pet lover (I evolved to liking them after a good few years). My first and only pet was a cat named Tombis (adventures with her pertaining to transporting her in my jacket can be read here) and most recently (well, nearly three years now) I am an aunty to a mongrel-cross collie named Megan (my sister & brother-in-laws dog) and she is the cutest -as long as she does not slobber over me!
- Of all the mobile phones I have owned (there has been many) the Xperia10 has experienced the most (more than 10 times) battering due to it slipping out of my hands (due to its cumbersomeness).
- I was in Turkey when the biggest earthquake shook it in 1999, my Art degree show was based on this experience, to see an example of one of the exhibited pieces please click here.
Now you are it!
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Just like the game ‘tag’ played in schools; once tagged another person(s) need to be tagged so you can be set free… Therefore, I tag you, you and you (it’s great to know you -just want to get to know y’all better 
): Pamela V Mason, Cari and Rance Denton <— Check out their blogs too; they are cool fab writer-type people.
Upcoming Plans & Schedule: Well, that’s all for today, I shall be back on Saturday with ‘Saturday’s Showcase Sketches’ until then stay safe, happy and try to do a good deed each day (It’ll make you feel that much better -that warm glow in your heart will just shine ).
Want to read more -here’s a few handpicked articles:
For Flash Fiction-lovers, the challenge this month: Challenge Issued: Turner’s Tapestries (A Reminder)
For game-lovers: If you want to test yourself and the voices of the characters you come up with why don’t you take a gander at this game I have devised: A Fun Game – In Your Head.
Pick your favourite Flash Fiction(s) in Flash-A-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa -for a chance to have a say in what should be polished and published…
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word’.
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Pdf document: Tagged from Me to You
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin@yikici.co.uk
Care to join me for some collaborative work or want to be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
Umm…yeah that’s how I feel…
Whimsical Wednesday Writings:
Heya, today’s post is going to be very short (by my standards); I have no ROW80 updates to give you other than blog post word counts, chapters read for beta-reading and number of blogs I have visited; therefore, I will give you my update this Sunday coming (apologies if you were looking forward to it). It’s not been a bad few days since Sunday -it’s just not been just as good and because of this I just don’t feel too inspired today. -I know I am being tough on myself.
So, this is me for today, I will be back tomorrow with an award (well a tag-thingy that’s been passed on to me) and news on that newsletter publication I had mentioned a while back; in the meantime please feel free to read the last few days post.
Sunday’ ROW80 Update: A Glitch in the System
For Flash Fiction-lovers, the challenge this month: Challenge Issued: Turner’s Tapestries (A Reminder)
For game-lovers: If you want to test yourself and the voices of the characters you come up with why don’t you take a gander at this game I have devised: A Fun Game – In Your Head.
Copyright © Ozlem Yikici 2011 & Copyright © doodllz™ 2011. All Rights Reserved.
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Do you love challenges/games? What challenges/games tickle your fancy? I would love to hear from you. As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word’.
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Pdf document: Umm…yeah that’s how I feel…
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin@yikici.co.uk
Care to join me for some collaborative work or want to be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
A Glitch in the System
Savvy Sunday Salutations:
Dearest readers, I am late in posting this article today (I decided to have a few days off and now here I am Sunday morning trying to put together a post worth reading -hmmm; maybe I’m just pushing my luck a wee bit). I have some (very little) news from Patrick Tulley; we have not discussed full reasons of his absence, but it seems he has a little too much going on at his end, I will keep you updated as and when I know more, until then you have to put up with me. Last week I talked about JMW Turner; this week (due to the time-constraint I have restricted on myself) I will continue with Turner -well I just want to concentrate on that anecdote I had left you with; that story has stayed with me since A-Level Art & Design, I feel it’s only fair I give it some deserved dues.
My ROW80 Update will follow the article below –scroll down to the end if you do not want to read the next bit (I won’t take any offence –well, I’ll try not to ).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
LESSONS FROM TURNER -PART DUEX:
There has been many things said about Turner -and no doubt, many more will be said. -I know I said that last week, thought a bit of déjà vu was in order -you know the saying:
“A déjà vu is usually a glitch in the Matrix…”
-Trinity, The Matrix (1999)
-well that’s me all over; a permanent glitch hanging over my head this Sunday; this translates into two things:
1) I just have to put up with it; and most importantly,
2) You just have to deal with it.
For those who are asking, yes I loved The Matrix; very clever -it paved the way for the preceding films we’ve seen since -another forerunner in its’ industry; but today we are not talking about The Matrix. Today we go back to Turner; remember that little story I shared with you last week, here it is again for those who missed it:
“It has been said that, Turner would have himself tied to the mast of a sailing ship whilst at sea to experience the storms so he could relay it into his paintings.”
From this anecdote, it is easy to visualise Turner conjuring up these masterpieces:
Shipwreck by Joseph Mallord William Turner
Slave Ship by Joseph Mallord William Turner
Both very different -yet very similar; the dynamics vary ever so slightly; yet that change makes a remarked difference. In the first painting, there’s movement with an uncanny stillness in the darkness of the night sky -you can feel the waves tossing, the ship battling against the torrents yet there is an odd calmness which I cannot place; almost as if despite the conditions the crew and passengers are safe. Then the second painting, with its vague-blurred lines gives that sense of gusto, panic and drowning under the most beautiful of skies -an impression of a moment -possibly captured as the anecdote portrays, a man tied to a mast taking in the moment; being whole with its subject -whatever the conditions may be, ironic or otherwise… When we feed this idea into writing, we can see a similarity, -our characters. To get to know them, to really get into their skins we become them -in parts or as wholes (some through experience some through research); we feel their pain, their love, their angst’s, their drive. -When we are so close to our characters as Turner was to his subject; does that not make you feel that you have something solid, believable and writeable? To create a masterpiece one needs to be fully immersed into their work -they must believe what they create or else it will fall away like dust…
Finally, as I leave Turner here, I want to share with you the painting that made me fall in love with Turner and on the next ‘Lessons from Turner’ (this will not always be on a Sunday, so keep an extra eye out on Monday’s, Thursday’s and possibly Friday’s too), I will do my best to interpret the painting and add some insight on how a picture can tell a thousand words. Until then why don’t you analyse the painting and come up with your own thoughts.
Rain, Steam & Speed - The Great Western Railway by JMW Turner
ROW80 UPDATE:
If you want to see my progress-at-a-glance (from the first week through to now with all my goals -amendments included) please head on over to my ROW80-Round 3 page.
Overview since Wednesday: This week has been a bit bleh with regards to word counts for Becoming- Mystical Realisations, but it has been productive nonetheless as I have been thinking and plotting about how to devise the next chapter(s). I have to do some outlining as parts of the story had to change; so no words but some development on the story -albeit brewing in my head; this is a good thing.
In brief, here’s what I have achieved since Wednesday:
WIP word count: 0 /1,000
DiRosaYikici word count: 0/1,000
Blog post word count: 2514 /1,000
Combined effort word count: 2514 /1,000
Progress up until 11th September 2011:
WIP word count: 7,268 /40,000
Blog post word count: 29,618 /40,000
DiRosaYikici word count: 597 /40,000
Combined effort word count: 37,483 /40,000 (See the ROW80 progress bar on the side menu.)
Blogs visited (ROW80′ers & Writecampaign’ers): 37 in total
Beta-reader project: On Chapter Six (that’s page 26 of 204)
I guess it has not been a bad week per se; though I always hope my WIP would speed up more than my blog posts -I know I should not grumble. What with a slow start to today’s post, we find ourselves at the end of it, which means this is ta-raaa from me, I’ll be back on Tuesday with a Flash Fiction Challenge I hope to see you then.
In the meantime, if you want to test yourself and the voices of the characters you come up with why don’t you take a gander at this game I have devised: A Fun Game – In Your Head. Have a fab Sunday and a great week following; till Tuesday adios amigos.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: A Glitch in the System
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin@yikici.co.uk
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A Mixed Bag of News, Updates & the First Campaign Challenge
Whimsical Wednesday Writings:
Oh, a golly gosh and a helloooo there! (Now, I bet you were thinking that’s a blast from the past.) Anyhoo, I have some exciting news to share with you today, a ROW80 update and stories, stories galore -you are in for a treat! So, without any further ado, sit comfortably and take in the delights whilst I grab myself a cuppa.
Please feel free to scroll down to the sections that are of interest to you -that is if you do not want to read the next bit (I won’t take any offence –well, I’ll try not to ).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
ROW80 Update
Firstly, let us start with a ROW80 update… It has been a positive week (for some reason radiance is sprouting all around me); I’ve been writing away, sticking to goals -and doing my best to visit fab blogs (it’s been hectic but fun) and keeping up with Twitter. Here’s a glimpse of what I have achieved and decided to take on:
Blogs I have visited and commented on since Sunday:
- ROW80′ers: 5 blogs
- Writers’ Platform-Building Campaigners: 23 blogs
Apologies; I will be rectifying this from today onwards (I was blogged out Friday and Saturday then had a busy few days at home) *hopes I can be forgiven*
Added goals with some musings:
- I don’t know why but I should really add the word counts for the stories I write over at DiRosaYikici (it’s raw, quite rough and needs some editing -but Di Rosa and I are just having fun with the continuation of the contemporary tales -as, are our readers; so we just keep on going. (It was my turn to update Where There’s a Will There’s a Way this week, so check it out in the stories section below).
- Volunteered to be a beta reader (my first beta reading experience); I hope I do a good job of it; it requires feedback by next week so guess what I’ll be doing after writing this? Yep, that’s correct.
- Being proactive with our newly formed critique group; a group of four writers and bloggers alike have formed a nifty critique group and we are finalising how we will work together, so I aim to be quite proactive with that too.
Progress Since Sunday 4th September 2011:
WIP word count: 350 words written.
Blog post word count: 733 + 1521 words written.
DiRosaYikici word count: 597 words written.
Combined effort word count: 3201 (See the ROW80 progress bar on the side menu.)
That’s like 1000 words per day –not bad; dare I say on target? *cheers*
To check out my progress-to-date-page please click here.
Exciting News
A little while ago, I read a very insightful post on Haley Whitehall’s blog it was about reviewing your work with a critical eye and looking at the shift of power within a scene or two. This post was written by the talented Tiffany Lawson Inman (AKA the @NakedEditor over on Twitter -go on follow her for editing tips etc -you know you want to). Tiffany set a competition for us to take part in -I took a gamble and entered the competition, which Tiffany was hosting on her blog. (Sadly the competition is closed, but Tiffany has told me that she will be hosting a few more competitions leading up to Camp NaNoWriMo, so why don’t you pop over to her blog and check out what she’s up to -I truly recommend it), and I won! *dances a jig, stops, looks up* ‘Aren’t you joining me?‘ So, come October I’ll be busy studying *wonders if I’ve drawn the short straw* -oh man that’s like extra work Tiffany! (I’m only kidding; I’m looking forward to it.)
Stories, stories, stories…
Now comes the fun part! Today, I have three stories (and a surprise) to share with you, the first two, as you know, are updates on the storyline to the ongoing saga over at DiRosaYikici, please head on over to the blog and read what Gina and Tracy are up to in:
Where there’s a Will there’s a Way (read entry number 17 -bottom of the page) – Battered and bruised, will Tracy find a way to reach out to Katie?
Our Story Begins (updated by Di Rosa) – I will update this next week, for those who want to find out what happened to Gina after a night out with Nathanial James, please head on over for a catch-up.
The third story I want to share is a flash fiction piece inspired by Rachael Harrie’ challenge for the Writers’ Platform-Building Campaign. You all know I love challenges -the tougher the better, so I had to take part.
Rachael Harrie’ first campaigner challenge is as thus:
“Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “The door swung open” These four words will be included in the word count.
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), use the same beginning words and end with the words: “the door swung shut.” (also included in the word count)”
For those who want an even greater challenge, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!
A challenge must always be challenging, guess what I chose to do? Yep, I took the extreme option. I hope it works; I ended up writing two flash fictions, I couldn’t submit both so I picked the following, I hope it was the right choice… What do you think?* I give you…
The Patient Mind
The door swung open; I waited patiently as always; I waited, I waited… it just swung back and forth in the wind; Sally smiled down on me “It’s time you stopped this you know.”
I shook my head “’tis not time, I must now count to a hundred.”
“It won’t change” she pressed my shoulders gently as she left.
I waited, watching the breeze filter the leaves in and out, I counted.
Sally came again, I counted two hundred, then three, then four; “it won’t change,” she said again. I knew, in my heart I knew, it would, but I couldn’t tell Sally, she didn’t know; she didn’t know the nights, the nights it changed; it promised it’ll change today; it promised yesterday and the day before; it promised, so it must, I knew, in my heart I knew. Sally walked past, she walked past every day, said the same things, she never went away. “It won’t change,” she taunted; she screamed in my head; that Sally needs to see how it will change, it promised it would.
Today Sally stopped by the door; it came; a grin spread across my face as she stepped outside; the door swung shut.
(For the ever inquisitive the word count excluding the title is 200 words –with it its 203.)
*If you like ‘The Patient Mind’ and want to cast your vote I’m number 198 on the Linksy List <— click here to read all the fantastic entries.
Surprise: If you was wondering what didn’t make the cut I’ve added it (The Calling…) below just for fun (Please Note: this piece is not being submitted to the challenge). Before we read ‘The Calling’, I wanted to say this story is actually inspired by two challengers: Billie Jo Woods over at Out of the Woods and Rachael Harrie’ challenge for the Writers’ Platform-Building Campaign (as above). You all know I love combining challenges so this was no exception.
Billie Jo Woods set the September challenge to go back to school, her rules are:
- Make sure your story takes place in a school.
- Keep it to roughly 500 words (although if you need more that is okay too).
It’s odd as the moment I saw the opening line for Rachael Harrie’ challenge this story wove itself with Billie Jo’ challenge -its’ as if it were meant to be… (That’s why it was difficult to choose one story for the Campaign Challenge, nevertheless, I guess now that means one submission to the Campaign (The Patient Mind) and one submission to Billie Jo’ September Challenge (The Calling…) What are your thoughts? I present…
The Calling…
The door swung open. We gasped as they shrugged off their skins whilst gliding into the classroom.
“It’s as simple as that.” It said towering over us –with its extended limbs hovering hypnotically.
It was a routine drill, they were recruiting –so they say; it had become the norm ever since he –Mr Carmichael chose…
There’s been rumours since his disappearance that he and it are one of the same, but I couldn’t be certain –not Mr Carmichael, he wouldn’t –it was in my face; my vision blurred instantly as I gulped, sweat droplets seemed to sprout in quick succession as they sang with alarm, please don’t take me, please don’t take me.
“Maybe you should volunteer this time, it’s only fair –saves the pain for the rest of them; it’d be a pity if we had to kill them all -when it’s you we need.” Its words slithered and tightened round my throat as huge dumbbells came crashing down on me, realisation sinking in as I gasped for air.
“Your calling is coming my dear boy,” he had said last semester, “when the time comes, you must choose.” My insides knotted as Mr Carmichael entered, the door swung shut.
(The word count excluding the title is 200 words –with it its 202.)
So, that’s all for today, I will be back on Friday with a Frivolous Fun post, I hope you pop back then.
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Do you love challenges? What challenges tickle your fancy? I would love to hear from you. As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word’.
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Pdf document: A Mixed Bag of News, Updates & the First Campaign Challenge
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Recycling -but not as you know it…
Monday’s Meandering Muse:
A fabulous hello to you all -my lovely readers. I am sat in front of my laptop, typing away whilst sipping a hot mug of Chinese tea (jasmine tea to some of you); you can say I’m multi-tasking if you like. I call it just being comfortable with the addition of being in a great mood to write (therefore, I cannot guarantee what length this post will be, so let’s see together).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
Out with the Old and in with the New(ish)
Image sourced from: ThisNext.com
I have been in talks with a few writers and bloggers and it seems, at times, there’s moments of ‘blankness’ -nope I am not calling it writers’ block. We, writers fall under the assumption that we suffer from that curse , but I assure you, there’s no such thing -it’s all in the mind -really and truly; we just hide behind it when we are not 100% and can’t get into writing. Let me give you an example, since blogging, I have had to think of different topics to discuss and share with you; there have been times when I have sat in front of my laptop and thought ‘I cannot think of what to write,‘ 9 out of 10 times that was caused because of my low moods -not my inability to find a topic to discuss. Therefore, I am certain that all writers’ suffer from a similar bout of ‘blankness’.
Enough said now where was I? Oh yes, so I was pondering, as I always do; thinking what suggestions I could come up with then it hit me in the face (no not literally silly!); when I was clearing out that box (you know the box where I found my old dissertation; see yesterdays post), I stumbled across all my assignments and course notes. You thinking what I am thinking? Yep, exactly, it’s a perfect place to start from; I agree, it’s old and maybe it needs redrafting -you probably write better now too, but essentially it will give you ideas which you can work on, develop further and, the most important aspect of it is, you can share it with us; make it into something new(ish). From Turner’s dissertation alone I came up with an idea of ‘Lessons from Turner’ and I am thinking of developing that into a short series, as there are many more insights from him that I would like to share with you. I can even see ways of adapting his methods in to the writing world; so keep your eyes out for that. For those who have not been to University, don’t fret, look through your school/college/short course notes -or even things you have researched for work, etc -you get the idea, recycle what you have learnt; think of it as the three R’s: Re-learn, re-write, recycle -oh, don’t forget to share your newfound inspiration with us
My Questions to You
Where do you get your inspirations? How would you revive old news? Any tips you would like to share with us?
This post has been short, sweet and to the point My next post will be on Wednesday (a ROW80 update –hopefully I will have WIP word counts to share *excited*), I will also post you details of the stories I’m working on over at DiRosaYikici; until then have fun, stay safe and smile always. The world is as good as you make it, so live life to its potential and cherish every moment.
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Pdf document: Recycling -but not as you know it…
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Lessons from Turner & ROW80
Savvy Sunday Salutations:
Dearest readers, I know some of you are looking forward to reading more insights from Patrick Tulley, unfortunately I have been unable to get in contact with him (he may have taken a holiday and failed to let me know *tut tut*), I’ll keep you updated when I know more. In the meantime, I will open this Sunday slot to a few of my favourite bloggers and every now and again I will send some salutation love to people I admire in this lovely world we live in. Last week my grandmother took centre stage and today, as promised, I will introduce you a pioneer in the Art world, my first choice Artist of all time is JMW Turner. Those who know me will not be surprised with this decision of mine and for those who don’t, you shall soon learn muhaawaawaaaaah -or something to that effect.
My ROW80 Update will follow the article below –scroll down to the end if you do not want to read the next bit (I won’t take any offence –well, I’ll try not to ).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
LESSONS FROM TURNER:
Discussions from the past…
“Why Turner? Joseph Mallord William Turner (1775-1851) was and is still one of the most important British Landscape painters. My interest in his work began when I was doing my ‘A-levels’ at college. Although I had looked at many other artists in the preceding years, I have always come back to Turner, each time examining a different aspect of his work. Again, I am drawn back; this time taking Turner as a colourist, investigating how he used his colour and how Johann Wolfgang von Goethe (1749-1832) influenced him. Turner was a master of innovations, especially in terms of colour. I consider Turner to be the grandfather of the Impressionists. I believe he was a colourist ahead of his time and this is the theme I based my study on. I have investigated how Turner’s work progressed in relationship to colour and light. I believe I have achieved this by comparing Turner to other artists who have influenced him such as Richard Wilson (1714-1782) and Claude Lorrain (1600-1682). These comparisons have enabled me to show how Turner’s use of colour changed gradually from his early work to his later work. I believe I have successfully achieved this in my study by arranging Turner’s artistic career -of about sixty years, into three periods: Firstly, his ‘early-years’ as a topographical student (1788-1812). Secondly, his ‘mid-years’ when he developed mastery skills in landscape compositions as well as developing his individual artistic style (1812-1835), and finally his ‘late-period’ consists of working with the ‘sublime’ in an abstract way, using colour as the focal point (1835-1851).
In my study, I have investigated how Turner managed to create atmosphere using only colour and paint. I have discussed how Turner used mystical landscapes and why they were so full of light. I also aimed to find out how important Turner’s subject matter was to him, and if this changed as he matured. In conjunction to this, I have also attempted to answer the following questions: ‘was colour and light the only thing that mattered to him in his later years? If so, ‘did it take over the subject-matter of his paintings?’ “
…so was my opening chapter of my dissertation (thesis)… I know, I cheated *blushes* -I was going to write something new but as I was clearing through my boxed stuff, I came across my dissertation and thought it was rather ironic and apt that I stumbled across this whilst I was in preparations to write a piece on Turner. I re-read it (as you do) and thought the introduction chapter would best explain why Turner is my favourite artist and also it gives you a taster of what he is about… Don’t worry I will not be writing the remaining chapters of my thesis here -that would be taking liberties.
Dido Building Carthage The Rise of the Carthaginian Empire by JMW Turner
Today, I want to discuss another aspect of Turner that I find admirable -his work ethics. Turner started off as an eager topographical student, he studied hard and this, with his status allowed him a place within the ranks of the Royal Academy elitists. It is interesting to note that Turner did not care for this ‘pretentious’ gathering but he was shrewd and knew he needed to be part of them in order to excel and make a living out of his art. Turner kept in with the ‘in-crowd’, produced the works that would ‘sell’ -he was one of the few lucky (or shall we say clever) artists’ who actually reaped the benefits of his talents whilst he was alive. Turner was smart; he understood that in the society he lived in, his vision of light would be frowned upon, so he deliberately kept these out from the critics eyes (though some lesser shocking ones he did exhibit and in turn was criticized severely).
Turner had travelled a long distance where his career was concerned. He was undoubtedly, a genius in the making; he always seemed to be one-step ahead. He knew how to get the recognition he wanted and played along with the rest of the Art World to get where he wanted. He studied and persevered when all the critics were against him. His vision of light had opened up new possibilities of abstraction, which was evident in Crossing the Brook (one of this months flash fiction prompts) and Dido Carthage. With these and the vast amount of paintings/studies he Bequest in his will to the nation, Turner paved the way for Modern Art and its artists -especially the Impressionists.
There’s much said about Turner and possibly more to discuss; amongst which are lessons to be learnt. To get to where we want to be we must study; stretch our minds and abilities. We must not allow the critics to break us; if we need to improve, that’s what we must do; if we fall down we must learn to pick ourselves up as they say ‘sticks and stones…’ If we are ahead of our time (wouldn’t that be nice) -let’s take a leaf out from Turner’s book, let us embody our work, develop it but at the same time, work within the constraints’ of the industry; when there’s an opening in the market and our style is applauded then let all hell break-loose.
Before I move on, I want to leave you with one thought about Turner… It has been said that, Turner would have himself tied to the mast of a sailing ship whilst at sea to experience the storms so he could relay it into his paintings. Are you that committed? How far would you go for your artistic drive?
ROW80 UPDATE:
I have some update on Becoming, I am getting some more feedback from my beta reader, which is constructive, this has put me in a better mood. The additions I made to the story plot (I had to introduce some characters earlier than I initially planned to), seems to work better so that is good news. I was also worrying I was telling more than showing, but it seems I am more of a harsh critic of my work; I’ve been told the balance is right -yay; note to myself *must not be so hard on myself*. With this positivity and the reminder of Turner’s remarkable work ethics, I believe more work on Becoming will be in the pipeline. I hope that on Wednesday my WIP word count will rise *prays*.
If you want to see my progress-at-a-glance please head on over to my ROW80-Round 3 page.
New Goals (Tweaked & Lessons Learnt):
In line with my positivity, I am moving the goal posts (as the current combined blog/WIP word count is shattered -see below). My previous ROW80 goals will remain the same as they are working for me; I just want to add:
- Aimed combined word count for the last two weeks will be 40,000 (I’m sure I can manage another 10,000 within the remaining timeframe -what do you think?).
- Visiting and commenting on at least 5 ROW80′ers blogs per check-in -for huge cheers; lets cheer all together!
- Visiting and commenting on at least 5 Campaigners blogs too (daily -may need a rethink for this, watch this space) -let me hear you say ‘yeah’ *grins*
It seems I have been concentrating too much on my blog posts and not on my novel -and my ROW80-Round 3 page has highlighted this clearly in black and white so I took heed and amended my blog schedule so I can work in some time for my novel. Yippieeeeeeeee!
Progress up until 4th September 2011:
WIP word count: 6,918 /28,000
Blog post word count: 24,850 /28,000
Combined effort word count: 31,768 /28,000 (See the ROW80 progress bar on the side menu.)
Well, that’s me done for today, I’ll be back on Monday with a muse or two I’ll see you then, stay inspired and if your down in the dumps, remember Turner’s fighting spirit and do not be afraid to explore your skills, you may be a pioneer like Turner one day. *Wishful thinking*
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: Lessons from Turner & ROW80
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ROW80 is getting (me) Organised!
Thursday’s (Belated) Topical Tête-à-Tête:
Firstly, I want to say I am saddened by what I have seen in the news and what ordeals you have had to face on the East Coast. I have just seen reports of another bout of storms; hurricane Katia and a tropical cyclone on the Gulf 
I do hope these do not come inland and cause any destructions; you are all in my thoughts and prayers, I do wish you all to stay safe and out of harm’s way. 
I’m sending you all a little something -I hope it brings you good luck; the Irish swear by it. Secondly, I want to apologise for the lateness of this post (I seem to have lost my synch with my daily routine -hope to get back on form soon(ish) -I have been working on my schedule at least, so that is something positive, for more details see below). Today’s topical discussion is rotating about how things stand with me in relation to the writing world -I thought it is rather apt considering my recent sign-up to the Writers’ Platform-Building Campaign.
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
ROW80 is Getting (me) Organised!
I have had an odd few weeks and I am certain you all are aware of how erratic I have been (maybe erratic is the wrong word choice, but I’m tired and that’s the closest word I can find, so I’m sticking to it) -the word erratic is more geared at my working pattern rather than my own person… There has not been much stability on that front and I worked out why thanks to my new ROW80 page and progress bars over on the right of this page -now why did I not do that sooner! It seems I have been allocating a lot of my time to writing blog posts as opposed to my actual Novel (no wonder that’s been a wee bit stagnant *shakes head in bewilderment*); therefore, I have had a rethink and made slight amendments to the schedule -just so I can breathe a bit better; I was beginning to suffocate -Eak! So, that’s sorted and taken off my ‘to do list’ (geez, there’s so many things to do -I think I’m going to see stars) *faints* -ok, okaaaaaaaaaaay I was pulling your leg. Now let’s get back to some serious stuff…
Flash -A-aaaaaaaaaaaaa
Don’t ask me why, but that song (yes the one from the rather cheesy film Flash Gordon) is playing in my head over and over again -I just had to use it as a title because, I want to talk about -yep, you guessed it, FLASH Fictions. (I know, I know -very bad sense of humour; but I’m tired -that’s my excuse and I am sticking to it!) As you know, I have become addicted to writing flash fictions and now the collection of stories has amalgamated to a total of 10+(ish) since I started back in April 2011 (word count being 6125 in total). From your responses, there has been a few stories which cried out to be expanded further and the other stories were appreciated as they were. As time progressed I began to think about these, and one of my main thoughts were (and still is) is to collate them in a book as a collection of short stories; some I’d work on (e.g. Moon of Change being a firm favourite amongst you all) and those that work well without any developments will just be edited to perfection. Therefore, the question on everyone’s lips (including mine); which of the following stories would you like to see being collated in this book project of mine I am about to embark upon:
The Quest for the Hidden Dagger
Moon of Change & Moon of Change – The Prologue & Epilogue
I’d appreciate it if you could select your top 5 and list them in preference order and let me know which one’s you’d like me to developed further. Please note them in the comment box below or email me directly at ozlem@yikici.co.uk -I aim to ensure the forthcoming collection’s word count is near 10,000 words; which means there will be a couple of surprise stories/snippets added to make the count. To make this interesting and give you some incentive to participate, I believe a contest is in order (my very first one); I will select 5 people’s name from the list of commenter’s’ below and they will receive a copy of my book once it is published. Exciting huh? Well, what are you waiting for… get-a-voting-and-a-compiling…
and Finally…
Before, I head off to the land of Zzzzzzz’s (which I need to get going to very soon(ish)); this is for those who missed my very first interview over at meanderfit.com -aptly titled ‘Ozlem Yikici – The London Novelist‘. If you want to find out how the interview went please pop over to Mindi’ blog and have a read -as well as a wander… Well, that’s me done and dusted -so to speak, wishing you all a good night and I will no doubt have words on Saturday, until then, stay safe, be happy, keep smiling and don’t forget it’s a beautiful world out there in the vast universe we call Earth!
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: ROW80 is getting (me) Organised!
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at ozlem@yikici.co.uk
Bittersweet ROW80 Goals Cherished with Love
Savvy Sunday Salutations:
It seems I have misplaced Patrick Tulley -or he may have gone AWOL; it won’t be long before I send out a search warrant in the meantime, I’d like to to take this opportunity to pay homage to someone who as had a great influence in my life -some of you may think that person is JMW Turner -but no (keep an eye out for him this Tuesday and possibly next Sunday). The person I have on the tip of my tongue is someone I cherish dearly and love to bits; today I want to talk about my grandma…
My ROW80 Update will follow the article below –scroll down to the end if you do not want to read the next bit (I won’t take any offence –well, I’ll try not to 
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(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
CHERISHED WITH LOVE:
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We all have someone we look up to, love and respect -and many of us have more than just that one person. One of my special people is my grandmother, there has been moments where I have argued with her (when I did not get my way as a child) but many of my memories of my grandma is fond and full of warmth. She is a strong woman who has brought up four children as a widower, maintained her farm in her village (Artvin Yusufeli Kιlιçkaya), became a midwife to many children, earned the respect of her peers (family & community), moved around to different parts of Turkey (even came to the UK) -my first memories are from when she was living in Istanbul. A well travelled, well loved and above all a well respected individual who instilled good values into people’s hearts with her love of faith. Whenever I go to Turkey, whomever I meet; always asks of my grandmother and whenever she goes to Istanbul to stay with my aunt -most days/nights there are visitor popping by to show her their respects. I rarely see this kind of homage here in the UK (although I know of a few individuals who have a similar closeness with their family and community). My gran is now too old to travel (no one knows exactly her right age but last I asked I was told she was at least 98 years of age -that was a year ago); in the last few years she has began to show signs of dementia, though this does not hinder her inner beauty or her-now-childlike banter. There’s something about my gran that warms my heart and brings a tear to my eye…
My gran is also a feisty character (in a mellow-type-way -don’t ask, she just manages to be feisty but not, if that makes sense ). I remember last year when I was over in Turkey and it was the month of Ramadan (just like this month) -despite her old age and ailments, she insisted on fasting and at times refused to eat when dinner was ready. I guess now that the month of Ramadan is coming to an end and the feast festival of Eid-al-Fitr is upon us, my thoughts have gone back to my gran. This has brought out the love I cherish for her and also some bittersweet memories and because of this I have shared my thoughts and love for this uniquely special woman. You must have someone as special in your life; I’d love to hear your thoughts and anecdotes…
BITTERSWEET ROW80 UPDATE:
Since my last update I have not written anything towards Becoming (I share your sentiments exactly *tuts*) however, my blog word counts have amounted to 3071 + 878 (the ROW80 page -see below) + 903 (today’s post) -so that already over the 0-500 daily word count so I’m happy *cheers*. Although, there has been no movement on Becoming, I have created a page for ROW80 as I promised to do so; please hover over the Social Interactions tab (menu header above) -you will see the ROW80 section there. Despite the lack of word counts towards my Novel, there has been development on the written word at least -and taking heed and strength from my beloved grandma, I am humbled to say I have achieved a bittersweet goal today. How has your week held up? I know some fellow ROW80′ers have had tough weeks, but I am certain its being washed away as we speak and a new day-is-a-dawning for all, stay positive and keep on writing -I salute you all.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: Bittersweet ROW80 Goals Cherished with Love
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at ozlem@yikici.co.uk
Care to join me for some collaborative work or want to be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
Challenge Taken: Once-Upon-A-Time
Saturday’s Showcase Sketches:
As mentioned in yesterday’s post, I have been working on this month’s flash fiction challenge -again I’ve tried something different and hope it reads well, I may need to re-edit at some point as I still see it as a possible longer piece; some more depth is needed methinks and also more work with weaving in purism… Anyhoo, I will let you be the judge on that also -so please let me know your thoughts and I’ll take them on board. Now back to the challenges at hand and also the lovely challengers.
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
The challenge(s) I am aiming to meet are as follows:
Challenger No 1: Ken Broad (has serious magical powers) issued another fab picture prompt (see somewhere below) and his challenge rules can be viewed here.
Challenger No 2: Billie Jo Woods (always surprises me with challenging challenges -are you really trying to push my boundaries?) set the question ‘Where did I come from?’, click here for her rules.
Challenger No 3: Sonia G. Medeiros (I salute thee who’s challenges as well as stories are as fresh and compelling as the next one) challenged us to create doorways -here’s her rules.
Challenger No 4: Haley Whitehall (introduced me to flash fictions and now I’m addicted -so you can blame her -go on -I do ) challenge involved aspects of dreams and the various forms of it, for more insight on her rules click here.
Challenger No 5: Little Moi (couldn’t leave myself out), my rules (which you should know by now) are here.
For the ever inquisitive the word count is (a little over by) 514 (with the title it is 518). Enjoy!
ONCE-UPON-A-TIME
Once-upon-a-time…
Lyn
I always thought bedtime stories were made-up fantasies for kids. Make-believe as some adults would say… So, I never questioned it –not until today. Today I sit on a dust-ridden couch in a dark, dank room which smells of some vile, putrid fragrance which I care not to ponder too much on or else, I may just gag until my death comes –it’s my room they say; I know better, I know how their lies fall freely, I know what this is and where I am. This is not my home -damn my alter-ego for tricking me and placing me here; a re-occurring nightmare which I plan to end –I have hopes and dreams –I will find my way back to where I came from.
…in a world where two worlds existed independently of the other; opposites to a point they were identical –yin and yang in some respects; mirroring each other but worlds apart; a collision course set-in-motion, adventure in the air; our heroes, Lyn cursed Glyn for what he stole…and he for what she ignored…
Glyn
Serves her right for being so naive in her fluffy-white clouds, dreams of meeting her prince in some lame tower –it was all too simple, not a trick –she was willing it to be true –and for my part, it was; I am a man –maybe not of prince material, but a man at least. There was a tower –well a lighthouse if I must be exact –but a tower nonetheless. I will not be guilt-ridden for making her wishes come true! She saw her prince and now she can wait some more; I have no plans to return back to my rancid cell-of-a-room –she can have that all to herself, after all it had been created from the impact of her decisions in this world –now it’s my time to reap the benefits –not wallow in leftover scraps from her royal highness!
…Two worlds, where one makes decisions and the other accepts the options left with no choice –a world where their actions are shadowed by the decision-maker, a world where their voice cannot be heard…
Glyn
Who does she think she –the Queen?
I have a right mind to-
A lesson she needs and a lesson she shall get –there are rules to abide by, she should know –everyone knows; if there isn’t there should be, I’ll instil it if I must and then I’ll make sure the rules stick.
…a world where the silent voices fights back…
Lyn
I need to find that lighthouse where…-if I get my hands on Glyn I’ll give him a piece of my mind! I never thought I would be part of a tale –the tale of the ‘Distant Worlds’ where I am Trinity and he is Neo; a tale I’ve read a million times –how did I get here? How did I end up as a story, how did I fail to read the signs?
“Day 164: Cozied Up” by Snugg LePup (Image sourced through: Flickr)
…where the rules become stories, where stories become real and where reality is questionable by all except you…
The End.
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It’s really bizarre how this story kind of unintentionally wove these challenges together(ish) on its own (not much planning here); some may be more visible than others (brownie points if you can spot them in the story). So the million dollar/sterling (doesn’t have the same ring now does it?) question is, how did I fare? Yay or nay? Any places to improve on?
Do you take part in flash fictions? Where can we read them? How and why did you start?
As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: Challenge Taken – Once-Upon-A-Time
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Care to join me for some collaborative work or be a guest blogger? If so, email me at the above address.
A Fun Game – In Your Head
Frivolous Fun Friday:
Oh my! *looks around in excitement* ‘you really and truly think so? Oooo now I must get some sort of acceptance speech together -hey! No need to be such a meanie!’ *pouts* ‘I was dreaming of the possibilities, I am soooo touched by the lovely suggestion.‘ *dabs tears with handkerchief* -are you feeling the love also? I surely am; spammers or not -who cares, it certainly put a smile on my face and a spring in my steps.
I may not be of Pulitzer Prize material (a girl can dream), but it’s good to know somewhere out there a-Marty Feldman-deceased *ahem* thinks I am worthy of such a honour. *beams a gracious smile then winks* what are your spammers like? Any quirky, fun, polite, wacky, courteous, advice seeking, advice giver, constant sales reps’ -or like mine; totally complimentary? 
I’d love to hear any fun/bizarre anecdotes.
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
Let the Fun Game Begin…
How’s it going so far? Need to digest it? Sure, in the meantime let me delve into the whys and hows… I actually got inspired to create this game after three random occurrences fell my way.
In Your Head
Now let’s think back to the setting and the character(s) that will take part in that setting (go on have another read if you must -then come back here); back and ready? Good, now I want you to devise a short dialogue of about 200-300 words -this can be in any genre you feel comfortable with. Ok so far? Excellent, now listen carefully, do not post this little exercise until I say so -or else the fun will be lost. The key point of this game is your character(s), I want you to build them as you would any other character, get to know them inside and out, their likes, their hates etc -jot it all down and keep this for the second round of this game (that’ll be in two weeks time). Great, now that you know your character(s); write them in into that 200-300 piece of writing, make sure the following points are included and acted out within the dialogue (this is still in line with my theory):
Ok, with these guidelines in mind build your character(s). Note: Try to keep away from stereotypes -if you cannot then add a quirky character trait; this will help the game be more fun and hopefully challenge you all. Remember, no sharing your dialogues or character(s) until I say so. Now get those character(s) and dialogue a-ready; think, plot and come back in two weeks time; I will reveal the next stage of the game. Before you disappear, please let us know if you would be joining in with the game by adding a comment below -just so we know. The more the merrier!
If you have any questions, please ask me below in the comment box or via the contact details below.
Before I forget, this game is for fun so sadly there are no prizes; but if it proves popular and there’s a demand for it to be played again in the future, I’ll keep a note and consider it then.
Have a fab-tastic Friday and a wondrous weekend. Keep that positivity-a-glowing and your smile forever shining -stay in peace.
A Tiny Note: This game will be played in three stages; this is stage one. Stage two is in a fortnight (23/09/2011) and stage three is two weeks after that (07/10/2011). I will let you in on my theory in two weeks time.
Copyright © Ozlem Yikici 2011 & Copyright © doodllz™ 2011. All Rights Reserved.
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As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: A Fun Game – In Your Head
If there is a topic you would like me to look into and explore in my own yikici-kind-of-way then please feel free to leave a suggestion in the comment box below or for those of you who are a wee bit shy drop me a line via my contact page or email me at admin@yikici.co.uk