I Hear Voices – The Fourth Fight
Voice Week – I Hear Voices:
It’s day four of voice week! There has been a lot of fabulous entries, why don’t you pop on over to here and check them out. If you have missed out on my previous submissions, click here (voice 1), here (voice 2) and here (voice 3). Here’s ‘voice 4′; my entry for today continues with ‘The Fight’ (the first one to be 100 words exactly -woo hoo!).
(As always, there is a pdf document at the bottom of the post for those who may find this a difficult read.)
The Fight – Voice 4:
So what if I pushed her?
Her eyes steamed,
Her lungs exploded…
My thoughts giggled as the pranks, taunts enraged her more.
My eyes strained to listen then danced as it peaked through the gap in the door; she picked up speed, engines roaring; she slipped. I began to shake as if an earthquake struck -a tsunami to follow; I let the pressure release, doubled up as my sides hurt from the hilarity of her response –always the extreme, a drama queen!
So what if I pushed her? She needs to chill out, let me be and forget about dad.
Did I succeed in creating a good voice? How did you find the voice; can you guess who this voice belongs to? What kind of character might they be? How does this voice differ from the last three voices (if any)? Tomorrows voice just came to me and I think it will be just perfect for the task at hand. *grins*
I’ll be back tomorrow with another post for voice week (the fifth voice for the same scenario above). So, until tomorrow, think smart and remember to keep smiling and staying-A-positive.
As you already know, thoughts and comments are encouraged as always -even if it is just a word -as ‘all good discussions start with just one word‘.
Pdf document: I Hear Voices – The Fourth Fight
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